一、英语翻译 尽量口语化
I am fond of calligraphy, and have won a prize in a national contest. I have a three-year-experience of being High School monitor and am always ready to help others. i was in a moive named Chang'e Xian Xue (Blood Donation from Fairy Chang'e). I am a person with the virtue of being willing to help others all the time, and the shortcoming of loving sleeping late, which is also the part I am trying to overcome. This is me, an easy-going person. I wish you would remember me.
请问你的“拍电影”是做演员还是其他的具体工作啊？如果能有点细节就好了。
另外这一段话里你两次提到“乐于助人”，个人认为有些重复，而且也没有凸显出什么。
在你最后的总结中，你提到自己非常随和，但是前面也没有什么上文可循。
总之，如果这是参加比赛或者面试的一段自我介绍的话，个人觉得流于平淡，很难给人留下深刻的印象。
不管怎么样，祝你好运吧！
请看本人手工正确翻译：
I like caligraphy and has won a national prize.I had been a class monitor in high school for 3 years,and I am always ready to help others.I have acted in a movie called Chang E Xian Xue.My greatest advantage is being ready to help people.and my weakness is loving to lie in.But I am overcoming it.This is me,a easygoing me.I wish you teachers could remember me.
I like calligraphy and i have won the national prize for it. I had been monitor when i was in senior high school. what's more, i have played a role in the movie Chang E donated blood. the biggest advantage is to be glad to help others and liking sleeping late is my disadvantage, which i am trying to overcome. this is me, an easy-going person. Hoper every teacher can remeber me! My name is XXX
二、英语口语很差，感觉表达不出自己的意思，怎样有效提高？
英语的学习不是一朝一夕的，是需要长时间的积累过程，单词，语法，听力，这些是最基本的，不过最主要的是口语的练习，多听多练是最有效的，最好是可以经常和外国人交流，进行语言的交换，文化的交流也是可以提升外语的。
还是下点功夫去学英语吧。
多读多记多背，并长期坚持，其余别无他法。
坚持每天都说几句，不要怕语法错误，不要怕用词不当，不要怕不连贯。
每天要说的要用的，都尽快录下来，写下来，然后抽空纠错。长期坚持，你会成功的。
可以先背诵几个范文，坚持每日朗读英文，时间长了语感好了就会有提高的。
三、大家猜一下这是什么英语口语化
对话：
Guess what?
猜猜看是什么事？
What?
什么事？
其他句型：
a．Guess what?
= Can you guess what happened?
（猜猜看是什么事？）
往往对方没头没脑地那么问时，我们会此回答：
What?（什么事？）
b．另外，guess也可作名词，有下列重要词组：
take/make a guess 猜一猜
例：A: Who is going to win the prize?
（甲：谁会得奖？）
B: Take/Make a guess.
（乙：你猜。）
你猜这是什么
What do you think this is
以上为机器翻译结果，长、整句建议使用 人工翻译 。
英语口语是被英语国家人民普遍应用的口头交流的语言形式。英语口语通常是通过声音传播的。英语文学作品中也常以书面形式记叙英语口语。英语口语灵活多变，多因场合与发言者不同而被自由使用。与口语相对，书面英语是在口语的基础上发展出来的，用于书面表达的语言。